Why
There was a war
From home so far
Soldiers fighting for a land
walking barfoot through the sand
In this war people died
Why could we be so blind
Fighting against another land
Fighting on foreign sand
But we never will stop fighting
And all poeple are frighting
Why will this never end
To fight on foreign sand
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3 comments:
nice
the 2nd
why was there war(suggestion)
i like this one
1. deep yet simple, liked it alot
2. why will this never end to fight on foreign sand.
3. fix the typos and its all good :)
4. I like this one alot but i'll give my final opinion after i read the other one.
1) I love it, it makes me think of how fragile life is.
2) I truely like almost the entire thing...I can't decide.
3) "Soldiers fighing for a land" that line doesn't make the most sense...
4) I like this on the best!
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