1. Lauric high School is like every High School. There are always problems beside the normal school life. Most of the problems are because of the different groups of students, like the inteloigent guys , the sports guys and the outstanding guys.
2. Andrea just started her school year on Lauric High School. She was the principal on a school on nthe other side of a country, but she was replaced after 12 pupils were shoot last year in April.
3."Do you know what it is like to see people die? Of course you konw you are a police officer. So I just wanted to prvent another massacre." Adrea says.
4. Last year Andrea saw 12 poeple die and she knows that she will never let this happen again. So she tryz to make everything different at her new High School.
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3 comments:
I like #4 better, because it's less drawn out and more exciting and making me want to read more!
My favorite of the four would be number 1. The reason is because I think a lot of people can relate to that opening and it would make them want to read on.
3 dialog =)
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